Matt Bellamy

Are you sure it's 8? weds = 7 thurs = 6 fri = 5 sat = 4 sun = 3 But Sunday is THE day :?

"The moon hangs high in the sky, full, mysterious, and dark Shadowed clouds roll cautiously across the starless sky" Might sound better if you took the first sky out...that way ...

Your poems never cease to entertain me. Great fun to say aloud, frantic, frenzied words stuck together worked very well.

You didn't keep to one rhyming pattern-some stanzas had the rhyming pattern ABCB, some were ABBC, and some had no rhyming at all. It would flow much easier if you ...

You need to sort out your...what are they called, italic thingies. [/i] goes at the end of the text, not [i] Apart from that, I quite liked this. You kept ...

I shall now go crit a load of poems since this is my second piece I posted this week and I've yet to crit anything myself. I don't even know ...

I celebrate Christmas, my family is Roman Catholic. As for traditions, we just laze about with our presents then have dinner, laze about some more and my sister and her ...

I've had poems published in a couple of anthologies, apart from that, nope.

"It is not the thread that is the problem. That is part of the solution. The people actively involved in the thread, however, are merely adding to the problem."

Pretty good. I don#'t get to hear many jokes, but this was ok.

Ooh, could you crit my poem Distance please? I really need some help and it only has one comment.

Aww, you're hair looks pretty in that pic, Emz!

Maybe if there was a hive nearby or something it would be more obvious to people that they are meant to be bees? All the same, nicely done :)

I am Happy Scared Loved up Surprised Not really here Wishing I was somewhere else or wishing someone else was here Probably like she once did Want and need and ...

You gotta put the arrows on the floor so that the cow goes over it and follows that direction, to get it to the trophy thingybob. It would be useful ...